The Best
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
Under The Best, the speaker describes crosses, washing, love, control and power, then links hatred with the military and those who govern. Hair, a flag and a revised closing passage about breasts, a deep slit, a rifle and fire end the page.
The speaker disputes a man's belief that the speaker is filled with love, naming control and power instead. The handwritten handsome comparison complicates the judgment of governing figures. Readable fragments in the closing revision connect the body with military imagery, but their order remains uncertain and does not support a settled action or biographical event.
Under the title 'The Best', the speaker moves from 'My arms sway in the wind waiting' through 'He was wrong; I am filled with control;' to 'blind hatred, because now the military has it', revises who seems 'HANDSOME' and who is 'ugly', and ends with 'weave your flag out of my long hair,' and the fragments 'Put deep slit with', 'my together fine rifle', 'BRESTS' and 'fire'.
Each feeling replaces the last, love by control, then power, then hatred, and the handwritten revisions keep shifting the comparison. The close is kept as separate fragments because its order is uncertain, so the poem ends on images rather than a finished sentence.