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By Jack Joseph Smith

The drum roll my God they do it in highschool Wander a little bit further The distance Even bacj then The young and the alone I now know a deep slit in my soul Finish up Go ahead memory Lets finish up Sunflowers at fair to mid land sunk in the skinny livestock medow The crows don't do shit They are like me they could care less about the bones

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AI Interpretation

GPT

A drum roll recalls high school, distance, and youth before the speaker addresses memory and asks to finish. Sunflowers, a livestock meadow, crows, and bones close the page with an assertion of indifference.

The turn from remembered sound to the landscape places a wound in the soul beside the wish to end recollection. The crows' inaction becomes a comparison for the speaker, not proof of a particular event. Source spellings and the unresolved-looking but readable bacj are retained rather than regularized.


Claude

The poem says 'The drum roll / my God they do it in highschool', 'Even bacj then', 'I now know a deep slit / in my soul', and ends 'The crows don't do shit / They are like me / they could care less / about the bones'.

Memory and indifference meet in the image of crows ignoring bones. 'bacj' is kept as typed.