Page 71
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
A remembered hat and country crosses lead toward washing in a stream and longing for him. The speaker disputes being filled with love, speaks of lost control, and compares power with a horse image, military appearance, and governors.
The handwritten replacement gives a loose state in contrast to being filled, while control is lost. Its exact case remains provisional. The speaker turns from private longing to images of authority, without evidence for a factual account of the author's life.
The poem says 'I was wearing a hat / I willl never forget it', 'I go and wash my armpits / and my breats across', 'He always thought I was filled with love / He was wrong', 'I am LoosE with the control I have lost', and ends 'The governers are ugly'.
This typed page reworks lines from page 003, with a handwritten 'LoosE' replacing a struck word. The judgments about power and government are the speaker's.