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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker tends a candle, considers greatness at a drafting table and describes a man as fire and part of a brolen Sun. After invoking a grandmother's grandmother and turning toward sleep, the speaker adds handwritten words about shoulders, ARE GATE and TwLight.
The speaker pairs household skill with fire and inherited knowledge. The closing insertion and marginal block need further review for placement, so this reading leaves their relation to the typed ending open.
Typed rows say 'I am in the dark and the candel is oerfect', 'He dows not just know fire, everyone does / where I come from, he is fire', and 'When they shut off the electruem you / would be suttrised what I can do with / rhw voues of my grandma's grandma'x', with handwritten 'Catch me I will sleep with you' and the margin 'Now my shoulders / ARE GATE / TwLight'.
Candlelight, inherited voices and a man described as fire make a night scene of control and intimacy. The typing errors are kept, and the margin block's attachment to the flame lines is not settled.