Untitled ("Let me tell you about us swimming the strem")
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker recalls swimming before church, claims fearlessness and expects the person loved to be murdered. The last line pairs birth with heaven and hell.
The speaker's certainty about murder belongs to this account, not a confirmed event. The handwriting extends the last typed line, but its letter case remains uncertain.
The poem says 'Let me tell you about us swimming the strem', 'We we're Sala mander's / from day one', 'I am you and certain / that the one I love / is going to be murdered', and ends 'You are born with heven; you are born with hell'.
Childhood swimming and church give way to a dread of violence, closed by a paired blessing and curse. The handwritten 'born with hell' continues the last typed row; its final letters may be capitals.