Untitled ("Don't think I was not on the natch")
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker describes watching the universe, living with death and taking a hike when something is dead by the creek. A stranger prompts a wish to speak as though a lifelong friend were gone.
The handwritten friend replaces doctor and the following words are kept on their own row. The poem connects death with a wished-for connection, but the stranger's identity and the closing letter case remain unsettled.
The speaker says 'Don't think I was not on the natch / watching the universe', that 'Living with death on purpose / Has a lot to do / with what children are for', and wanted to speak to a stranger 'As if I had a life long FriENd', with the handwritten close 'goNE Now'.
A stranger seen near the creek prompts a feeling of lost companionship; the handwritten FriENd replaces a struck word and goNE Now sits below the last typed row, so its attachment is provisional.