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By Jack Joseph Smith

to a hault at an intersection of bricks laid streets in an area called old Virginia mannor. The homes are well constructed and date back two generations of upper-middle class. The boys begin to unload and stack bailed newspapers designated for this stop. A women in her early thirities approaches. She is well dressed and reasonably attractive. The women has been let off at the beginning of her steps by another lady possibly ten years her senior, who has parked her car, and is now carrying the thin type of boxes made for clothing in the fancy shops up the walk and into a stone home, above a manacured lawn. Although the lady has retained much of the figure of youth, she comes on to Ben with a controled and deliberate voice of a much older women set into the conservitive ways of the upper middle- class fifties. She is speaking: "What are these boys doing with you and this paper truck. They should be in school?" Ben is out of his truck now helping the boys. "Hey lady," he says. "We're sett'in up a situation. How about it now, let's everybody go about their own business." She stands back. Narrowed in, and speaks. "I'm calling the school board and the labor people. What are your names boys? I can see that your not from his part of town." Ben begins to pace up and down snickering and shaking his head. The boys notice Ben's displeasureable humor, and begin to giggle. "I'll just get the licence," she says going to the back of the truck.

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Ben's truck route enters affluent old Virginia mannor, where a woman challenges the boys' absence from school and threatens to report them and identify Ben.

Smith describes stone homes, clothing boxes and a manicured lawn before the woman demands names and questions the boys' right to be there. Ben answers through humor, pacing and snickering, and the boys begin to giggle. A faint ethnic-background annotation has no settled insertion point; it remains outside the body and does not establish a further detail about either woman.


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Ben's paper truck stops in 'an area called old Virginia mannor,' where the boys unload bailed newspapers and a well-dressed woman in her 'early thirities,' just back from the fancy shops, challenges him: 'What are these boys doing with you and / this paper truck. They should be in school?' Ben answers 'We're sett'in up a situation,' she threatens to call 'the school board and the labor people,' and when she heads for the licence plate Ben paces 'snickering and shaking his head' while the boys giggle.

The page plays class tension as comedy of manners: stone homes, clothing boxes and a 'manacured lawn' set against a paper-truck driver and two truant boys. The woman's 'controled and deliberate voice' of the 'conservitive ways of the upper middle- / class fifties' meets Ben's loose, amused refusal to take her authority seriously. Pencil revisions about the women's background show the author still deciding how much social detail to spell out.