Shipping out

By Jack Joseph Smith

The South Seas were not any place or planit The glaze was careful and causous at a distance Expectations were slow and southern without a rainbow Danger leaped like corn in the ranks And searing suckers seemed a way of life Cannons like wind blow sneeked since the turn of the century Despert and dropped, torquoise at a slant, seven seas had no way out, across the deck we slept refusing to work Extinct as turtles we hung hard below the blidges To the cradle of civilization we were going and cared less Down under and the tropic of Caprone was whiskey for us Find your worth and find your folly, make life simple, and as dangerous as you can, keep the breeks you make for boats or bricks you do for mills, lauckluster your way after work, no camera is better than you

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GPT

The speaker recounts danger and refused labor during a South Seas voyage, then advises a listener to seek worth, folly and risk beyond work.

The speaker describes sea travel through heat, color, exhaustion and shipboard confinement. The closing advice carries that experience into everyday labor and ends by valuing a person's sight over a camera.

Claude

'Shipping out' opens 'The South Seas were not any place or planit' and renders the voyage as menace and torpor: 'Danger leaped like corn in the ranks', 'across the deck we slept refusing to work', 'Extinct as turtles we hung hard below the blidges'. It ends with blunt counsel, 'Find your worth and find your folly, make life simple, / and as dangerous as you can', closing 'no camera is better than you'.

The poem denies the romance of tropical escape, with 'no way out' for the 'seven seas', and fuses nature with war in 'Cannons like wind blow sneeked since the turn of the century'. The closing lines turn the voyage into a working creed that puts lived experience above any recording of it. Source spellings 'planit', 'causous', 'sneeked', 'Despert', 'torquoise', 'blidges', 'Caprone', 'breeks' and 'lauckluster' are kept as typed.