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By Jack Joseph Smith

Hitch hiking to Sonoita, Mexico via Mexicali, so Neil and Jack wouldn't get lo.st in Baja on their way down to Mazatlan. The hot and uncivilized border, Americans and Mexicans as well. Hitchhiking along the basin of the Sierra Madre. The gutar. The heavens filled with stars. The pick up truck. Jack going blind from red dog. The healing by the Mexican doctor in the one horse village. The constant memory of the first ride by the mad American. A convertable representive of the United States image. Hard alcohol was to stay away from. Even Tequila. Mazatlan; The Mazatlan hotel; hard wood up and down, all around. Afraid to dance with lovely girls in pink and white. The breaker wall against the cobble stone street, to and fro, connecting with the town. The beach in cove, Jack gazing in disbelief of the beauty; Neil with his dad's portable typewriter gift bought by Francisco. Tiping sixty words a minute; doing push ups. 75ยข or centavos a night for high ceilings and a courtyard. Approached with Marihuana by two black haired American speaking young men,

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The narrator sketches Neil and Jack's route through Mexico, a loss of sight and treatment, then hotel life, typing, exercise and an approach involving Marihuana in Mazatlan.

The narrator alternates travel dangers with a hotel's beauty and daily activities. The fear of dancing and the portable typewriter keep the account focused on the travelers' responses.

Claude

Typed scene notes: 'Hitch hiking to Sonoita, Mexico via Mexicali', then 'Hitchhiking along the basin of the Sierra Madre', 'Jack going blind / from red dog', and Mazatlan with its hotel, beach and 'Neil with his dad's portable typewriter'. The page breaks off mid-sentence after 'two black haired American speaking young men,'.

These fragmentary notes sketch a route and its episodes, and the unfinished final sentence shows that the outline continues elsewhere.