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Another physical copy places human greatness in wondering among clouds while also approving feet on the ground. Handwritten notes name Molokai, a channel and a tsunami wave, with a separate finally-through annotation.

The speaker joins imaginative movement with grounded life. This copy also places the finally-through annotation above the geographic notes on the right. The page does not settle how those notes relate to the verse.

A second physical copy of the poem on page 68: 'The greatness of man / Is only his wondering / in the clouds', with the same handwritten 'fiNAlly through' and place notes.

The duplicate confirms the text of page 68 and carries the same annotations.