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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker places human greatness in wondering among clouds while also approving feet on the ground. Handwritten notes name Molokai, a channel and a tsunami wave, with a separate finally-through annotation.
The speaker joins imaginative movement with grounded life. The geographic notes sit below the verse, while the finally-through annotation sits higher on the right. Their attachment remains uncertain.
A short typed poem: 'The greatness of man / Is only his wondering / in the clouds', balanced by 'Yet with his feet on the / ground is good too'. Handwritten notes below read 'fiNAlly through', 'MoLoKAI', 'PAILolo CHANNEL' and 'TSUNAMI WAVE'.
The poem weighs dreaming against groundedness and accepts both. The place notes and 'fiNAlly through' suggest a crossing near Molokai, though their link to the poem is provisional.