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By Jack Joseph Smith

Listing of scenes for (Nineteen Sixty Four) Tijuana, Mexico; New Years night. The battle at the whore house. San Diego, Calif. Drinking at Doctor Black's bungalow on Sunset Cliffs. His son Neil visiting his pregnate girlfriend, Lucy. Pittsburgh Jack taking steam baths down by the Navy Yards. Doctor Black's new wife, who had the bulk of the money, telling Jack how her former husband from Allentown, Pa. hung himself over the scientific hell of the fifties. Her name is Francisco, even though she is not Italian, yet everything about her mannor and enviorment suggest that she is. Her two sons are with her; they both are students of science, and absolutely dispise Neil. Neil shows Pittsburgh Jack the room he had locked behind him for three days until inside it was heard that now he could play the gutar.

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A scene list for Nineteen Sixty Four describes Tijuana on New Year's night and a San Diego household involving Doctor Black, Neil, Lucy and Pittsburgh Jack.

The writer sketches conflict, money and family relationships rather than developing continuous scenes. The final note describes Neil learning to play guitar after shutting himself in a room. These claims belong to the planned narrative.


Claude

A typed 'Listing of scenes for (Nineteen Sixty Four)': 'Tijuana, Mexico; New Years night. The battle at the whore house.' and a San Diego scene of 'Drinking at Doctor Black's bungalow on Sunset / Cliffs', ending with Neil, who locked himself in a room until 'now he could play the / gutar.'

An outline of planned episodes with named characters such as 'Pittsburgh Jack' and 'Doctor Black'. These are draft fiction scenes, not verified biography.