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By Jack Joseph Smith

II He could throw it. "So this is the guy who can hit at one hundred yards." Gibbons was just about to the field now. The Pennsylvania valley cliff was steeped short, but had some levels to it. "How ya doing Dick; what made you quit?" Gibbons laughed a little; then wheesed several times before he put his head back. Half way away down the field headed for the house he was feeling bad so he put back on his coat. Huffernegile felt like red wind when the ball went uncocked back behind his ear. He knew no difference between the whip and the dance. His body heaved, but then it didn't, and then something happened. Gibbons knew the sun had changed, so he ran with it. "He's alright," Gibbons thought. "A star at twenty, and still with the priests." He caught the pass, but he didn't throw it back because the team was fourteen and he didn't want to interrupt. The walk of gibbons actually thought of his good fortune. Living right down off the fields of play was one gift. He sat down for a dinner of pork and ate all he could. The table room was small. The curtains were red. Most everything was oak and pine, but mother felt it was not large enough, and possibly plastic could give more light because of the single stated windows. One sweep and Gibbons was up the stairs. "Your a good looking fucker," he said to the glass. He put his dinner belly out at least as tight as a monks ass. At the bottom of the stairs to the door, Mr. Gibbons said wait just in his head. Gibbons turned. "No troubble son." Gibbons had by now developed a laugh, but he did not now, or would he ever use it when concern was with his father. "Sure." Gone was Gibbons back into the cedar. The crispt fall night had fallen. He knew the utter of the black haired conversation that followed over the table for a mile, until he just felt sorry for the tea with no whiskey in an Irishmans place.

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AI Interpretation

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Gibbons catches a pass but does not throw it back, returns home for pork, studies himself in a mirror and meets his father at the door.

The speaker calls living below the playing fields a gift. Gibbons's developed laugh remains unavailable with his father, and his departure ends with pity for tea without whiskey.

Claude

Section II follows Gibbons from the practice field, where he catches a pass but 'didn't / want to interrupt', to a small house with red curtains, a dinner of pork, and a mirror where he says '"Your a good looking fucker,"'. His father's silent 'wait' at the stairs gets '"No troubble son."' and '"Sure."', and he goes back into the cedar on a 'crispt fall night'.

The page balances athletic ease with a guarded home life, where Gibbons's new laugh is withheld from his father. Its plain declarative sentences and odd phrasings, such as 'the utter of the black haired conversation', give the scene a blunt, overheard quality.