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By Jack Joseph Smith

I "(Cleveland), Ohio. Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. That's it." She said this with out a smile. Gibbons looked up at his mother. What he saw then made him a young man, and latter would make his mind fatal. When Gibbons walked away on the lawn, he heard his father say, "ok, I'll get the money." Gibbons was older now and he stroled through the cedar. He felt damn sure that he would know what every tree ment. He found out that he could run around it, but he could not buck it. Even though hiding behind the trees was unusual,mhe wondered with his mind why his body moving from one to the other made fixed things change. It's hard not to be noticed moving from one place to another, but it is easy if you know how to toss something there. His realization was powerful. Throwing a ball was the hunter they all liked. He could pass it. Lets see how we do with the re- flection of the leaves. Nice. Bad. Can't make the twig a chicken bone to my side. It fell all over his paw, and then it sailed. Now he would learn about David with the sheepskin. The transfer from Acron to Pittsburgh? Dandy's father said, "the plant will always hold its own, God damn it!" "When he smiles his teeth get further apart," said Gibbons just like speaking. He saw his mother's face all the time with the obsession of survival. That was not going to be easy. He came finally to the cliff. Looked across the augest field and laughed. Gibbons was sixteen and he knew the sun had given him perminent pink eye. He took his soot COAT off and threw it over his left shoulder and went on down the trail. The coaches saw him coming from the bluff. They loved him. Watched him out of the corner of their eye just like back at Notre Dame or lower Mc Kee's Rocks. Already he knew their warmth. "Ya fucken jagg offs," was muttered. No smile. Head cocked. "When are ya going to stop combing your hair Gibbons?" Huffernegile wanted to know what Gibbons thought he could do without any kind of suit on.

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Gibbons grows from his parents' lawn into a sixteen-year-old football player moving among trees, watching his mother and approaching the coaches.

The writer connects throwing a ball with hunting and attention to the landscape. Maternal survival and the coaches' affection surround Gibbons's confidence in his body.


Claude

Section I opens with a mother's flat list, '"(Cleveland), Ohio. Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. That's it."', then follows Gibbons as he walks through the cedar, learns he 'could / run around it, but he could not buck it', and at sixteen comes down to the coaches, who greet him with '"Ya fucken jagg offs,"' and a jibe about combing his hair.

The prose moves in short, blunt sentences, mixing family memory, a boy testing his body among trees, and the rough affection of the coaches. Source spellings such as 'stroled', 'augest' and 'perminent' give the typescript a raw, first-draft texture.