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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker weighs earning a thousand dollars tonight against getting it tomorrow by luck, recalls police and watching neighbors, and describes a mother's sense of estrangement.
One speaker knows his mother thinks he was never hers. The later invitation to come closer leads to a direct question about death, then an unfinished sentence about developers chopping up alleys.
A handwritten page of speculation and memory: 'What if / I make $1,000 dollars tomorrow / If I do it tonight I'll change.' leads to a scene in which, 'When the police came', there was 'a conference, before the mother / and the neighborhood / watching pick up sticks.' A quoted speaker then says 'I know that she / thinks that then I was never / hers. That was one. Ah. Women / get old.', and the page ends on '"Hey buddy! Come here, no shit. / Did you ever think about / death?"'
The page moves from a gambler's what-if to a public scene of police and watching neighbors, then to a private reckoning with a mother, so luck, exposure and estrangement sit side by side. The voice is plain and rueful, and the abrupt 'Hey buddy!' turns the reflection outward into a question about death. Several words remain unread and the last sentence breaks off, so these connections are left open.