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By Jack Joseph Smith

Day 1 Page 1 out of the question I am Albright Harkins, and I have entered to through my eyes render these stories, these living dreams, these ideas, and indeed vastly American, these characters. I am also here. To daily watch my eighty- eight year old father eat, watch television, do his garden; which is barren against what has gone before him, held at the sink with clay with the slight wiff of sewage from the zone of cheating someplace not to deep. There is not an excape. I dream on a couch; my son leans over the banaster, while my daughter does the track and field points of leav- ing and landing mostly in her mind. There has been dinner and screaming with the jungle in my vision. I didn't finish the books. Weaving life is not the same as sitting. Day 2 My father likes to fight when people are around him. I see that this is natural. Given the constant bug in the brain I need not repeat. As hard as it may be I shall stop and watch again. Fishing way on top. Wind is where we are while wide wooden windows wait for us; maybe even me, for the oar has snapped in Quebec. The son is asleep now, so it would be alright if there was a desire to play Jazz. Once there was a dream twice at the same time. We loved it, and kept on walking on city streets and country roads. It was a time of naming things, and that is how the world must always come back.

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Albright Harkins introduces himself as a teller of American stories while watching an eighty-eight-year-old father and his own children. On Day 2 he recalls his father's fighting, a snapped oar in Quebec, and a shared dream of walking and naming things.

Harkins describes domestic duties beside unfinished books and memories. He ends by connecting the naming of things with the world's return, without explaining the top annotation out of the question.

Claude

A typed journal draft headed 'Day 1 / Page 1', with the handwritten note 'out of the question' arrowed above the opening, in which the narrator announces 'I am Albright Harkins, and I have entered to through my eyes render / these stories'. He watches his 'eighty- / eight year old father eat, watch television, do his garden', dreams on a couch while his son leans over the 'banaster', and under 'Day 2' notes that 'the oar has snapped in Quebec' before ending 'It was a time of / naming things, and that is how the world must always come back.'

The page frames domestic caretaking as the raw material of storytelling, setting chores, family noise and 'the constant bug in the brain' beside the claim that 'Weaving life / is not the same as sitting'. The diary form and plain declarative sentences give it a steady, observant tone, and the closing turn to naming makes language the way the world is recovered.