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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker weighs letting another player act against taking the action oneself, then questions the value of keeping one's feet on the ground.
The writer replaces one with the other in the opening line and revises the final prefix to sometimes. The speaker treats passing and acting as choices within the same game.
In this handwritten 'Basketball' the speaker sets 'Looking the other way / And having some / one else do it' against 'looking the / other way and your / doing it'. It closes on 'Sometimes / it is good to have / your feet on the groud / Sometimes it's not.'
The page condenses the passing game into a choice between giving the play away and making it yourself, both disguised by the same look away. Visible revisions, 'the other' over a struck word and 'Sometimes' over a scribbled one, make the ending two-sided and aphoristic.