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By Jack Joseph Smith

Cindy, Beautifully tragic leaving, Flowers of Rotodendrom At the door of her exit, a man following, wabbling in the late afternoon, mellow though in his drunkeness and loss of possibly three days sleep, they kiss by a car at the curb of a brick laid street, The landcape and homes are of ivy and a more redish brick, they are the American English upper middle class, Her smile while leaving in the car is of a grace- ful loving, which means she is wise. A women of the world, who's instinct has not only thought about but had to deal with the abstract Back in the home the man. Drunk but favorable; in that he has the ability to make people smile at his madness, he is standing alone in the delicate livingroom of his parents home looking at himself in the mirror The frame of the glass

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Cindy leaves after a kiss by a car; the man returns to his parents' living room and looks in a mirror.

Ivy, redish brick, and the description of the American English upper middle class locate the parting socially. The narrator credits Cindy with worldly experience and describes the drunk man as someone who can still make people smile.

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Cindy, 'Beautifully tragic leaving', is followed out by a man 'wabbling in the / late afternoon', drunk and short of 'possibly three days sleep'; they kiss by a car on a brick street among homes of 'the American English upper middle / class'. Back inside, the man, 'Drunk but favorable;' and able 'to make people smile / at his madness', stands 'alone in the / delicate livingroom of his parents home looking / at himself in the mirror'.

The sketch sets a graceful, worldly woman ('A women / of the world') against a charming, self-destructive young man, with ivy and redish brick marking the class setting the notebook keeps returning to. Its long comma-linked sentences move like a camera from the curb back into the house. The unfinished last phrase, 'The frame of the glass', leaves him fixed in the mirror, alone with his own image.