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By Jack Joseph Smith

The Song Of Denny Phillips I was not there when he was born And I was not there when he died But I know the song of Denny Phillips And dates will never tell me when he was born And dates will never tell me when he did die. I was little yet, and walking fairly good along yards of stone, when I meet Denny Philips Ages were in front of us Together we knew we were large and glad; our cup rumith over Mystic preperations would always make a legand And there was literally a graveyard at our back As we were tought how athletics dance on concrete Aside from a ball in our hands, we cared about ice when the sun came through the stones. Our world was sort of like; the filed down half flipped movement of all the new moons Mostly it was fall when we fell from walls, and knocked ourselves apart over all the grass.

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The Song Of Denny Phillips begins by rejecting dates as an account of a friend's life and remembering their childhood among stone yards and a graveyard.

The boys find abundance in their shared world, expressed through the source phrase our cup rumith over. Athletics, falls from walls, and changing moons give the remembered friendship its own measures of time.


Claude

This typed page opens 'The Song Of Denny Phillips': the speaker was not there at Denny's birth or death but knows his song, then recalls meeting 'Denny Philips' in boyhood beside a graveyard. The boys feel 'large and glad', 'our cup rumith over', and the page ends as they 'fell from walls, / and knocked ourselves apart over all the grass.'

The poem measures a friendship by places and seasons rather than dates, turning neighborhood stone, grass and walls into a private legend. Its long, loosely lineated sentences and source spellings such as 'preperations', 'legand' and 'tought' give it the voice of a rough draft reaching for myth.