Page 12
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The Song Of Denny Phillips begins by rejecting dates as an account of a friend's life and remembering their childhood among stone yards and a graveyard.
The boys find abundance in their shared world, expressed through the source phrase our cup rumith over. Athletics, falls from walls, and changing moons give the remembered friendship its own measures of time.
This typed page opens 'The Song Of Denny Phillips': the speaker was not there at Denny's birth or death but knows his song, then recalls meeting 'Denny Philips' in boyhood beside a graveyard. The boys feel 'large and glad', 'our cup rumith over', and the page ends as they 'fell from walls, / and knocked ourselves apart over all the grass.'
The poem measures a friendship by places and seasons rather than dates, turning neighborhood stone, grass and walls into a private legend. Its long, loosely lineated sentences and source spellings such as 'preperations', 'legand' and 'tought' give it the voice of a rough draft reaching for myth.