Untitled ("When childhood never stops being tempting")

By Jack Joseph Smith

When childhood never stops being tempting You will not have to say I will be something someday And caged knows what swims in a tank While whatever ring you got is taken off when wildlife is daylight Drop the block and tackle Up with nothing, skidding with loose ends Feel lucky hangman, find a women for a deep dark secret, for where we might of been is nobodies future Cutting his ladies splendor against cowboys He had wide oaks brining oceans to the desert And knowing there is no such number as seven, he never placed a bet on a candle With a monkey, I suppose some snakes and desolate birds Wanders become foreign still die for the jib

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GPT

Childhood temptation leads to promised identity, cages, a removed ring, loose ends, and a hangman's secret. Cowboys, desert oaks, a rejected bet on a candle, and animals precede the final line about becoming foreign and dying for the jib.

The opening tells the addressee they need not promise to become something someday. The later commands and gambling images do not establish a biographical story; they connect temptation with risky choices and uncertain futures.

Claude

The poem begins 'When childhood never stops being tempting / You will not have to say I will be something someday' and runs through cages, a ring taken off, 'Feel lucky hangman' and 'nobodies future'. Later stanzas bring cowboys, 'wide oaks brining oceans to the desert', a man who 'never placed a bet on a candle', and a close in which 'Wanders become foreign still die for the jib'.

A lingering pull toward childhood is treated as release from promising a future self, then undercut by images of risk, gambling and loose ends. The long first stanza tumbles forward in fragments, while the shorter closing stanzas turn toward wandering and a sailing term for a final, oddly specific sacrifice.