Page 31
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker questions hearing the dead sing, then remembers Don entering the father's ashes and representing the South Walbash.
The speaker connects abandoning the technologic with inviting the lethal. In the second section, Don carries a connection to the past into the scene of the father's ashes. Typed cancellations remove was-there and the last only, while a separate was remains; the speaker leaves the revised sentence exposed.
The page opens with 'Maybe he never did hear the legends of the dead singing yes' and the resolve 'To leave the technologic and go to whip the rush,' ending its first section on 'Of course here we invite the lethal.' A second section turns to memory: 'When Don walked into the furnal of my father's ashes,' with the speaker recognizing Don as 'the only one who from the past, / was / The representive of the South Walbash.'
The first section answers the previous page's sea imagery in a more reflective, doubting register. The second shifts to a personal scene of mourning, where the father's ashes and a figure from the past meet. Typed cancellations and a stranded 'was' leave the final sentence visibly reworked, so its hesitation remains part of the text.