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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker imagines trading places with youngsters who catch birds, then addresses a son about fear, myth and the cost of being a misfit.
The speaker recalls swamp-like childhood and a change toward prehistoric imagination. A handwritten alley, cat and lady passage interrupts that account before warnings about passing myth to children and power bound by unfulfilled laughter. South Seas and elsewhere extends the route beyond Serria Madra; an omitted marginal word leaves the alley passage incomplete.
A bird's-eye prose passage says 'There is no cleanliness in the tropics' while 'these kids down there / are busy snatching us birds out of the sky', and the speaker, now 'switched to the prehistoric', would 'trade places / with this madness in a minute'. Verse lines follow: 'You will never be allowed to pass myth on to your children' and 'my being a misfit across the Serria Madra South Seas and elsewhere / is worth it. Son'.
The prose voice is casual ('if ya know what I mean') and speaks as one of the hunted birds, which makes the envy of the youngsters wry. The later verse turns to direct address with warnings about fear, thought and power 'bound with the cord of unfulfilled laughter'. The final 'Son' recasts the warnings as words to a child.