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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The page contrasts birds, tropical uncleanness, childhood, prehistoric sky imagination, and trading places with madness, then turns to myth, children, strangled power, laughter, and being a misfit across the Serria Madra, South Seas, and elsewhere.
The corrected text makes the page's movement clearer: a prose memory of looking up and down at birds gives way to a warning about transcendence, inheritance, and the cost of misfit identity. The restored STRANGLED and South Seas And Elsewhere notes make the lower coda harsher and more geographically scattered.
A prose paragraph about tropical tails and kids snatching birds out of the sky, giving way to a verse coda about transcendence denied and being a misfit across the Sierra Madre — the author's 'Iuse', 'recon'ed', 'Serria Madra' intact.