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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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AI Interpretation
Loss, Arizona dust, Utah salt, and divided gangs precede blood, a falling world, mistakes, and danger on the Moon. Catholic language and hatred lead to a closing command to make a shot or a dart.
The poem puts the instruction to do unto others beside shots, darts, and trouble. That pairing keeps its religious language close to the violence already present in the blood and falling-world lines.
Section III asks us to 'stay internal with the glory of our loss' amid 'The dust of Arizona and the salt of Utah' and gangs that 'split into singular sorrow'. It moves through blood, 'adverture' strapped down and 'significent mistakes' to 'Do unto others; make a shot, make a dart / The best of troubble, the last of Lot'.
Western landscape, street violence and religious language sit side by side, so that the Golden Rule arrives next to a shot and a dart. Three four-line stanzas and a closing couplet read as terse declarations, and the closing reference to Lot ties the poem's sense of loss to a biblical figure of flight and ruin.