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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker describes stones across water and upon sand, disclaims being a warrior, and expresses hatred and love of the warrior. The speaker urges respect for ourselves and others in the face of death.
The speaker considers traps and alternatives while refusing to think less of either side. The corrected handwritten Either links the alternatives inside one line. The page contains unresolved revisions, so its closing instruction should remain tied to the defensible wording rather than a reconstructed maxim.
'ThE WAY of ThE World' begins 'IT could bE / The Stone Across the / Water' and says 'I am not a warrior, I have only seen it,' and 'I hate the warrior; love the warrior'. It ends 'We must not think less of ourselves, or ThEM / bEforE or during the end'.
The speaker holds opposites together, and handwritten insertions push the poem toward self-respect in the face of death. The reading order of some insertions remains provisional.