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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker watches a muskrat with eyes like Eienstien near a farm. The typed lines mention drought and calves; the handwritten continuation adds pounding, purpose, dying calves, and weaving under the ground.
The speaker gives the animal an intention to come and see, then expands that visit into a response to loss. Readers encounter a typed ending beside a handwritten alternative. The farm details support a connection to drought and survival, while the overlapping revisions leave the final sequence unsettled.
The typed lines describe a muskrat: 'And there he came about; that Muskrat;', 'Licking his chops with spring water', with 'Eyes like Eienstien', and 'This muskrat had come to see'. A large handwritten rewrite continues 'and About the dying / of the CALVES, / This muskrat had / COME to recon with / WEAVING under the / ground'.
The animal becomes a witness to a farm's losses, with drought and dying calves behind it. The page holds both the typed draft and a handwritten revision, so the lines read as alternatives rather than one sequence. Margin words with no clear insertion point are not part of the reading.