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By Jack Joseph Smith

tribute visits," he said. "They watch through the wind- ows of the Aluman towers. They see the rivers, and the boats filled with coal and iron and chemicals. They see specks of seamen dancing to their work hours. They puff their cigars, and enjoy the imprint their heel has made on the face of the cities and its people. Further down the rivers, and further up the rivers, inbetween the cities, the seamen, the boatmen all, the captains and the navigators; they see the shacks, and the red sulfur on the water; they see the dead eyed faces of the men who stand along the locks working at the posts assigned to them. Not at least floating on the boats, the boatmen see the bank people of the rivers with an unmistakable death in their eyes. "The those that some call they, up on their first dis- gusting, them errit plush carpets, they are laughing with burber at this moment. Their walls are made of nothing but sheet rock, still they are laughing about their importance. And they are right about everything but the truth of their laughter."

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AI Interpretation

GPT

This page sharpens the class critique, setting the hard lives of river workers against the insulated self-importance of executives who watch from above.

The contrast is not only economic but moral. The poem imagines power as something elevated and detached, watching through the Aluman towers, while labor remains exposed to dirt, chemicals, and death along the river. What the privileged misread as entertainment or importance is measured here against the reality of men whose bodies bear the cost.

Claude

The executives in the aluminum tower watch the river of boats and coal and chemicals, enjoying the imprint their heel has made on the face of the city — while further along the rivers the boatmen and bank-people carry unmistakable death in their eyes. The page's class-rage is unusually direct, and the final lines break down into crossed-out revision as if the author could not settle on how to land it.