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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
At three o'clock, a night worker describes a rust-red moon above an electrically lit logging mill in the Oregon woods. They fire the boilers for the morning crew and name several pieces of mill machinery.
The worker places the moon and the machines in consecutive rows, without the stanza split of the old transcript. The corrected machinery names support a reading grounded in the speaker's work. A few handwritten words remain provisional, including the verb after Steam and the exact form of carrage and big ban.
A cursive note: 'In the middle of the / 3 o'clock night the moon / makes rust red in the / sky.', the speaker as 'the nightman' who fires 'the boilers for / the morning crew', and the machines 'the "barker"', 'the "carrage"', the 'big ban' saw and 're-saw'.
A plain night-shift scene that names the mill machines as characters; source spellings are kept.