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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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AI Interpretation
The speaker moves from a child's learning and a Baldwin reference into questions about artistic purpose, conscience, tears, and imagined heroes. Voices beyond a fence precede an odd man out and a sleeping drunk.
The writer questions artistic purpose and the comfort readers seek in sympathetic heroes. Tears and the hands of the voices replace the old fear-based interpretation. The uncertain closing verb limits a conclusion about the drunk, and the Baldwin title is a reference within the manuscript rather than evidence of a borrowed passage.
A handwritten passage that moves from 'A child mindful / of school lessons' and Baldwin's 'Go Tell It On / The Mountain' to 'To understand a purpose is to see / no purpose. The artist rebels at purposeful- / ness', 'Your tears wash but one face through many.', and the ending 'the drunk nods / is nogged and sleeps smiling.'
The writer weighs purpose and art against fear and comfort; parTing and nogged stay provisional.