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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker describes a man remaining true, sounds and water crossing a wall, and sight caught at an edge. People on the other side keep him from falling, yet he is troubled by there being no one.
The writer combines perception, separation and dependence on unseen others. The opening truth correction changes the former untruth claim, but the syntax remains difficult and should not be turned into a fixed philosophical conclusion. The final absence qualifies the speaker's account of support.
A handwritten passage: 'To Something he remained true.', sounds and water through a wall, 'The Sensation of / Sight - the eye caught in a circle cutting itself / along the edge. Balance in motion.', and 'That there was no one - / that was the only thing that bothered / him.'
The page describes isolation as a sensory experience; the opening To and That are provisional readings.