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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
A film narrator introduces autumn farmland in western Oregon and follows a man with his sheep dog beside the Long Tom. Lighting a cigarette prompts a view of the man's past occupations.
The narrator moves from a landscape to a character through a change in camera attention and memory. The descriptions belong to a film draft and do not establish the author's own employment or life.
A typed film opening numbered '1.' that moves from the Willimatte Valley to the Long Tom and introduces a man who is 'a logging mill worker, meat cutter, barn builder, and / vegtable grower' though 'his dress is more likened to that of a golfer', ending as the camera follows 'those occupations as they / pass through his memory.'
This version replaces the shooting with a portrait of work; the occupations become the film's way into the man's mind.