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By Jack Joseph Smith

Caught Up Two things against the middle, and a half lie A stone and a hard place, the devil may care The choice between two evils, and take it as you will I stood across the street and shot you, dead boy I fucked your wife, made money, and told everybody you in town and they enjoyed it, o.k. It wanted more of the story Watch your words where you can't walk again Tying up is important in like, some wish for their mother, while they can't hepl themselves, wanting it to get out of hand Touch thought, lean back and finger it Make gold out of original seeing Leave all morality go, leave the Indians tooo Gather it up and leave dreams behind Once again lie and lay away Make sorry a sin not something to care about Go ahead and go away, from no one gallant enough to follow you Kiss yourself goodby child Your good look are to dksgusting to watch And we are no good unless You look at least one thing twice

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A hostile speaker turns murder, adultery and public approval into advice about abandoning guilt.

Familiar idioms of compromise give way to violent and sexual boasts. The typed wish replacement changes the mother passage from a relative clause toward desire. Commands to leave morality, leave dreams behind and make sorry a sin lead to a closing demand to look twice.

Claude

'Caught Up' opens with stock phrases of compromise, 'A stone and a hard place' and 'The choice between two evils', then shifts to blunt confession: 'I stood across the street and shot you, dead boy / I fucked your wife, made money, and told everybody'. The second half is a run of commands, 'Leave all morality go, leave the Indians tooo', 'Make sorry a sin', 'Kiss yourself goodby child', ending 'And we are no good unless / You look at least one thing twice'.

The poem stages a speaker boasting of violence and betrayal and then advising the listener to discard guilt and dreams, so the voice sounds both menacing and self-accusing. Idioms, crude confession and imperative lines are stacked without stanza breaks, which keeps the tone relentless. The final couplet undercuts the bravado with a demand for a second look.