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By Jack Joseph Smith

Sudden Finished like a file Complete as a rule Done with master's vile A child dragged without a clue Kissing a gem or a stone Quiet as something fast beneath Saying were we ever alone County after county was our reach Seaming old cloth, isn't shallow talk On the highway with love and hate and worry Still as you move toward the edge you can disinbark After what it amounts to is there is no hurry It's over now, and not thought about

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GPT

Completion, childhood harm and a shared journey end in a departure that the speaker stops thinking about.

The three visible stanza gaps divide the poem's account of harm, recollection and departure. County boundaries and the highway give the shared past a route. The inserted is makes the penultimate line grammatically unsettled, while the final line declares the event over.

Claude

'Sudden' runs through short likenesses of ending, 'Finished like a file / Complete as a rule', then remembers a shared past of 'Kissing a gem or a stone' and travel where 'County after county was our reach'. On 'the highway with love and hate and worry' the speaker notes 'you can disinbark', decides 'there is no hurry', and closes: 'It's over now, and not thought about'.

The poem treats an ending as both abrupt and oddly calm, moving from hard similes of completion to a road journey and then a flat dismissal. Four short stanzas of loosely rhymed lines keep the tone clipped, and the handwritten 'is' leaves the penultimate line grammatically rough. Source spellings such as 'Seaming' and 'disinbark' give the language a homemade texture.