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By Jack Joseph Smith

Ominous She thinks the stars and wonders the world in kind He followers her and wonders why her is not so strong, as the stops he makes Soon we will dance across the world, just as everything will climb and cross a willow, when it says do it if you can Do it if you can, do it if you can, do it if you can See the sourse as burned out and needs to be renewed Work is a whistle don't you know And you can't leaf with the railroad anymore It can be wicked to see worlds wound out away from you, even when your sure of coming back Do you recall when someone in England said to keep a stif upper lip; well, arn't aids and hepitais, the best part of learning

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The speaker moves from courtship and a dare to renew a burned-out source toward estrangement and a closing question about illness.

The speaker repeats "do it if you can" and links work with the railroad. He describes "worlds wound out away from you" despite an expected return. Readers can understand wound as winding as well as injury; the speaker does not settle the choice.

Claude

'Ominous' begins with a couple: 'She thinks the stars and wonders the world in kind / He followers her and wonders why her is not so strong'. It promises 'Soon we will dance across the world', repeats 'Do it if you can, do it if you can, do it if you can', notes that 'Work is a whistle' and 'you can't leaf with the railroad anymore', and ends with 'a stif upper lip; well, / arn't aids and hepitais, / the best part of learning'.

The poem moves from romance and daring toward loss and a dark joke, which fits its title. The chanted refrain and the railroad and whistle images give it a work-song rhythm that breaks down as 'worlds wound out away from you'. The closing turn treats illness as a bitter kind of education, delivered in a flat, ironic tone.