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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
A song addressed to an uncle links solitary choice, inherited work and the use of a gift.
The speaker moves through rainbow, stars and silence before addressing an uncle who worked without family. The whiskey passage includes As if our stomachs for it or our image ever cared, but its handwritten reading order remains uncertain. The speaker promises to use the gift like an heir.
'Kin' opens 'On the run is not damaged, once again, / sorrow can be a good song' and tells a friend 'Don't slight yourself', then pictures running 'into the middle, / of a rainbow' and a spirit 'so silent'. It turns to an uncle: 'So Uncle, I'll take your gift and use it / Like an heir should', ending 'Your work without family, / was correct with the last of your math'.
The poem moves from consolation to an elegy for an uncle whose solitary work is judged 'correct'. The images of song, rainbow and stars stay abstract, while the ending is plain and accounting-like. Heavy handwritten revision changes several lines toward direct address, and a separate draft in the right margin is left out of the reading.