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By Jack Joseph Smith

Kin On the run is not damaged, once again, sorrow can be a good song Don't slight yourself my friend You are as good as anybody elses end you took not a side, to be fond or far Listen to yourself after long sleep Wait and watch and run into the middle, of a rainbow, its ends will let you, make a joke in the meadow, because getting there is only the first part of leaving twice The sky and stars are fire taking away form As meladous as a harp without wings Your spirit so silent is the wish of this soft song Again to sing hardly seeen and hardly heard Through this universe, your great choice and subtle thought, has left you alone And speaking is not my forfit My mind would have us everything to do, with gracious gallons of whiskey, As if our stomachs for it or our image ever cared So Uncle, I'll take your gift and use it Like an heir should And remember in your lonely death In this abstraction Your work without family, was correct with the last of your math

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AI Interpretation

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A song addressed to an uncle links solitary choice, inherited work and the use of a gift.

The speaker moves through rainbow, stars and silence before addressing an uncle who worked without family. The whiskey passage includes As if our stomachs for it or our image ever cared, but its handwritten reading order remains uncertain. The speaker promises to use the gift like an heir.


Claude

'Kin' opens 'On the run is not damaged, once again, / sorrow can be a good song' and tells a friend 'Don't slight yourself', then pictures running 'into the middle, / of a rainbow' and a spirit 'so silent'. It turns to an uncle: 'So Uncle, I'll take your gift and use it / Like an heir should', ending 'Your work without family, / was correct with the last of your math'.

The poem moves from consolation to an elegy for an uncle whose solitary work is judged 'correct'. The images of song, rainbow and stars stay abstract, while the ending is plain and accounting-like. Heavy handwritten revision changes several lines toward direct address, and a separate draft in the right margin is left out of the reading.