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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
Between Patchen and Hemingway, the poem turns literary judgment into a meditation on land, beauty, guns, Christ, and the uncertainty of farewell.
The page begins by ranking literary aloneness, then moves into a charged landscape of terror, beauty, guns, Christ, farewell, racialized selfhood, thievery, books, and children. The inserted or before slipping away keeps the middle passage syntactically open, while the revised ending suggests inheritance and disappearance; several handwritten corrections still need closer confirmation.
Literary judgment (Patchen vs. Hemingway) is placed alongside land, beauty, guns, and Christ, as if choosing between writers were as consequential as choosing between faiths.