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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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A roadside speaker faces a returning carriage and questions of fear, invitation and being carried.
The carriage returns through meadow and village while the addressed person walks, waits and listens. The handwritten About time and Terry follows the account of giving as grazing. The source's carrage spelling and fragmented syntax remain in the transcript.
'The Carrage' addresses someone walking down a road when 'some guy say, "hey are you afraid of me,"' and a carriage comes that 'you don't stop'. The carriage goes 'throughout the / medow and the village', returns with 'a coachmen ahead of two high horces', and the page ends in tangled lines about 'two heaves or princes' before 'giving / was a kind of grazing', followed by the handwritten 'About time and Terry'.
The poem starts as a small roadside scene of threat and waiting, then turns into looping, riddling syntax that resists a single reading. The repeated question 'are you afraid of me' and the returning carriage give it a dreamlike structure. The handwritten last line reads like a dedication or a note added after the fact.