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By Jack Joseph Smith

Bad Thoughts You can't keep the gift And want the death Of the same person At the same time If one gives you something Impossible to buy And then begins to steal In all ways Stealing being the same Pathological now And how do you do Kill it perhaps, when your sure The eyes and the hands are a trick Tripped up not tying the knot There again, where you wanted Perception to be finished Place ones self in middle thought A place where danger is unredeanable Everybody should know kick the can, From adventure to the street Those who just don't, or those who have forgot Leave it alone, so you can come back, see it again; The answer to Good thought

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The speaker wrestles with receiving a gift from someone who also steals, considering violence before urging distance and a return.

The opening rejects keeping someone's gift while wanting that person's death. The last handwritten correction replaces bad with Good in The answer to Good thought. That change complicates the title and the speaker's movement from killing it perhaps to leaving it alone.

Claude

'Bad Thoughts' begins 'You can't keep the gift / And want the death / Of the same person / At the same time', describing someone who gives 'something / Impossible to buy' and then 'begins to steal / In all ways'. The speaker considers 'Kill it perhaps', names 'A place where danger is unredeanable', and ends by advising 'Leave it alone, so you can come back, see it again; / The answer to Good thought', where a handwritten 'Good' replaces the struck 'bad'.

The poem works through a contradiction of gratitude and resentment in short, flat, aphoristic lines. It moves from the idea of violence toward restraint and return. The revision from 'bad' to 'Good' in the last line turns the title's bad thoughts toward a corrective ending.