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By Jack Joseph Smith

Intentional celestial destruction Fore-stands chance behind the uniformity of vivid bombs unleashing the chemical blaze of good-by charred humanity Against the sky smeared canvas of bloody beauty that makes Raphael at last abstract The pre-analytical dawn shimmering the darkness of a kind of color film concept free from plastics IS FIRST past-visionary sights warriors go blind from I can not remember lava And war I have only known one to one But battle lose the duelity I will not Of how intensely insane is slaughter Manufactured to drop on the objectivity of a dot

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The poem offers a jagged anti-war vision in which bomb light becomes a terrible aesthetic spectacle that strips both people and perception bare.

Even in fragments, the central contrast is clear: vivid chemical blaze and "bloody beauty" are set against charred humanity, so war is shown as visually seductive and morally obscene at the same time. The reference to Raphael becoming abstract suggests that slaughter scrambles older forms of order and beauty. Its broken syntax helps rather than hurts, because the language itself seems blasted apart by what it is trying to witness.


Claude

This untitled typed poem describes 'Intentional celestial destruction' as 'vivid bombs unleashing / the chemical blaze / of good-by charred humanity' across 'the sky smeared canvas / of bloody beauty / that makes Raphael at last abstract', then turns personal: 'I can not remember lava / And war I have only known one to one', and ends on bombs 'Manufactured to drop on the objectivity of a dot'.

The poem treats aerial bombing as a horrifying art show, where the sky becomes a canvas that outdoes classical painting and 'warriors go blind' from the sight. Its second stanza sets that abstraction against the speaker's limited, personal knowledge of violence, insisting he will not lose sight of 'how intensely insane is slaughter', and the final line exposes the cold targeting logic that reduces people to a dot.