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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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Street signs, remembered faces, and a boy's smile turn the city into a struggle over who gets seen and understood.
The language is jagged and partly fragmentary, but the pressure is clear: stop signs, illiteracy, confrontation, and racial memory all crowd the same block. A Black boy, a copper coin, and a nearly unremembered white little lady become tests of perception, especially once the poem says it is against art for a face not to be traced. By the end, standing on a creek of cement feels like standing inside unstable witness, trying to find clarity without losing what was actually seen.
An untitled street poem: a stop sign 'continues / its wait for the illiterate' while 'That Black boy flips back my memory / on the appearance of a copper coin;', '(Young Mister Shine'em On)', and 'a white on white little lady' in pink socks crosses 'the cobble brick laid iron rail / ___street car street___'; the speaker concludes 'It to be against art for a face not to be traced', says he 'had traveled with his watching...', and ends 'STANDING ON A CREEK OF CEMENT' asking 'should we not be clear from the top?'.
The poem sets two remembered city figures side by side, a Black shoeshine boy and a blank-faced white girl, and asks what each is allowed to see and be seen as. Its tangled syntax mimics memory crossing and recrossing a street, while the typed capitals and underscores act like street signs and rails. The insistence that an untraced face is 'against art' makes witnessing itself the moral task, ending on a demand for clarity 'from the top' that the fragmented poem cannot fully meet.