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By Jack Joseph Smith

The Petal Has No Seed I saw a petal fall for thee A petal fall And you were in time with season I then saw a world of petals falling Without confusing rhyme with reason; surrounding the orchard ground from the high branching circle of each fruit treed sky All about their pink and white moisture was moving down Now you may laugh less of a lover I did discover; in and out and too to one another Clinging around the seconds of touch Their excitement was even enough to let one's breath be the sound Yet thought to wonder is fastest When one watches the self Run up to step down time As music winds a leasure While what is incredably hard Is called floating when It's won To disappear like light without the slightest form of a figure; becomes "life is sweet" become "mind at large" During the days after the blossoms of spring When late summer flowers tilt toward... the petals of their own past with the trees gift back to Earth as body abstract of a sunken sky; they bend back their tight twigs Against the beneath beyond... nothing that lasts that does As it remains the place that will always exist between our seperation

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Falling petals become a meditation on touch, seasonal beauty, and the painful endurance of separation within a world that keeps shedding itself.

The poem begins in delicacy, with one petal for one beloved, then widens into an orchard where blossom-fall becomes almost total atmosphere. That abundance is tender but also fleeting, and the speaker keeps testing how love, breath, music, and wonder survive inside constant decline. By the end, late flowers bend toward their own past, and the space between two people is described as something both empty and permanent.

Claude

In 'The Petal Has No Seed' the speaker sees 'a petal fall / for thee', then 'a world of petals falling' around 'the orchard ground', their 'pink and white moisture' drifting down while lovers cling 'around the seconds of touch'; later, late summer flowers 'tilt toward... / the petals of their own past', and the poem closes on 'the place that will always exist / between our seperation'.

The title sets the tone: blossom without seed is beauty that yields no future, and the poem moves from a single tender petal to a whole orchard of loss. Love is measured in fleeting seconds and breath, and the speaker tries to name its elusive peak as 'floating' or 'mind at large'. The final stanza makes separation itself the one lasting place, so the poem's steady fall ends in a strange permanence.