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By Jack Joseph Smith

The Tower The first time leaning wind hit hard, secrets got defined at the bone And like chalk slicing lines of the mind, rather than metal, insanity builds and breaks images, just as bridges pillared on stone In our life business like the circus is tight, and when yesterday's balance has fallen today, tomorrow won't depend on explanation Yet in memory or conjured dream, thinking inbetween the disillusionment of reality, is the same as the adventurous search of the sailor Weakness for wishful war through windows will never work, for allowance is not kindly to deed, and holds on deliverance cancels all terms Yet though it is lovely... to close one's eyes for a single day, a breach of contract still is to condem - After running alternatives out to death; decision takes on large possibilities, as organized as a persons first words

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Under pressure, fantasy and explanation fall away, and the poem argues for hard decision in the face of collapse, imbalance, and mortality.

Wind, bone, chalk, bridges, circus balance, and breach of contract turn thought into a structural problem rather than a private mood. The poem distrusts wishful war through windows and even the brief luxury of closing one's eyes, because avoidance only postpones judgment. By the close, decision is presented as something grave but necessary, almost primal in its scale and clarity.

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'The Tower' begins when 'leaning wind hit hard' and 'secrets got defined at the bone', comparing how 'insanity builds and breaks images' to 'bridges pillared on stone' and calling life 'business like the circus'. It warns that 'Weakness for wishful war through windows / will never work' and ends with 'decision' that is 'as organized as a persons first words'.

The poem treats the mind as a structure under load, so sanity and collapse become questions of balance, pillars, and breakage. It distrusts even the lovely wish 'to close one's eyes for a single day', calling that avoidance 'a breach of contract'. The close suggests that real decision, reached after 'running alternatives out to death', is simple and basic rather than elaborate.