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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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AI Interpretation
The poem roots a speaker's sense of justice in sea, wind, family hurt, and a defiant desire to invent a self beyond inherited weakness.
The opening joins sand, ocean, birds, and fire in the soul, so identity begins in elemental sensations rather than abstraction. The father appears as both desired strength and source of disappointment, and the violent fantasy toward him shows how badly that lack has bitten into the speaker. Because the ending breaks into fragments, the voice feels still in formation, trying to make language large enough for memory, rage, and purpose.
Titled 'A SIOBHAN POEM', the typed poem has a speaker who 'grew out of the taste in the sand' in a place 'the wildest in the western world', watched 'white birds cover colors and crests' by the sea, remembers a father contrived 'as nomadic', admits 'Yet I wanted a strong dad / So I could kick his shins', and breaks off at 'out of give, get, gallant, and gain;'.
The poem builds an origin story out of sea, wind and birds, then turns to the father, whose weakness is framed through a parenthesis about 'desperate women and weak men'. The wish for a strong dad so the child could fight him is both comic and wounded, a desire for someone solid enough to push against. The unfinished ending, cut off mid-list, suggests the poem continues on the following pages.