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By Jack Joseph Smith

Chance Two and two across the stars Four syns I've seem them My life wants to know I did not see you Down and under But I tried to go Close for a ship Long as a tie I came back inbetween Still not tough enough To make a hold A loss to Christ A loss to Pascal A loss to all that I know now

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"Chance" counts two and two across the stars, moves through failed crossings, and arrives at a triple loss to Christ, Pascal, and the speaker's own hard-won knowledge.

The poem is built from attempted nearness that never quite becomes arrival. Ship, tie, in-between return, and failed holding all suggest a life unable to secure the thing it moves toward. Naming Christ and Pascal together turns the loss philosophical and spiritual at once, while the source's odd syns and seem keep the counting unstable.


Claude

Chance: Two and two across the stars, four suns. A loss to Christ, a loss to Pascal, a loss to all that I know now. The tone is accounting.