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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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AI Interpretation
Christ speaks on all four ways of the cross while Abraham, thunder, territory, and thirty years return Hermann to a sameness where being better is getting worse.
The cross opens outward in four directions, so salvation feels less like a single line than a crossroads. Abraham being only a diagram away from home shrinks sacred history into something sketched, portable, and abstract, while thunder and territory pull the voice back toward lived distance. Thirty years leading to the same self gives the handwritten question its bite: rhyme can make improvement sound elegant even when better is becoming worse.
'Hermann' two: Christ has spoken for you; Abraham never more than a diagram from home. Thirty years later they received themselves as the same. 'The question / In rhyme, did you ever notice / how [goddamn] better is getting worse.'