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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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AI Interpretation
Blind returns as a love poem of delay and invisibility, where dead stars, happenstance loss, shared dreams, touch, several heavens, and a handwritten I-WALKED OUT ONE SECOND beyond the stars keep two people mysteriously joined.
The stalled phone call gives the opening a small, ordinary frustration before the poem leaps outward into star death and renewal, now shadowed by the handwritten HAPINSTENCE / Lost note. Love is defined less as romance than as sharing a dream and a day-to-day thought, which makes union mental before it becomes physical. The lower handwritten coda extends the page past the typed ending into cosmic distance.
Revisits the 'Blind' poem of 220 with minor corrections; two stars dying to make another, love as sharing the same day-to-day thought, heavens that help 'people / who are two in the same.'