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By Jack Joseph Smith

Dylan What ya' gonna do; if I could play a guitar,. on top of poetry,. then, everyone would be leaving the hotel I beat the shit out of a convict At a place intime; cause I heard he was threating my kid, and by the time the cops came, I was at my potato factory drafting table,. solid oak with a perfect slant; when the police come on through the log cabin door, all along the sandstone fireplace, where from looking OVER BACK directly dark ivy or low window glass, leaded old and purple in those silent nights, turning I said, "hey guys, listen to this line," where abruptly, I'd say five, turned around and left.

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Dylan turns poetry into a confrontational performance: guitar over verse, violence against a convict, police entering a log cabin, and finally a spoken line that sends the men away.

The page presents poetry as something with room-clearing force, halfway between music, threat, and courtroom testimony. Domestic detail matters because the oak drafting table, sandstone fireplace, and purple leaded glass give the speaker's violence a made environment rather than an abstract stage. The handwritten corrections around the police and window-glass passage, including OVER BACK, keep the scene unstable, but the ending is clear: the speaker imagines the line itself as the thing that makes authority turn around and leave.

Claude

'Dylan': if I could play guitar on top of poetry, everybody would leave the hotel. Story of beating a convict for threatening his kid, police finding him at a potato-factory drafting table; he reads them a line and 'abruptly, I'd say five, turned around and left.'