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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The page makes high-wire labor into a study of doubled perception, where the worker's hand holds the spin and spouting while he is both beneath the top and, in another sense, the top itself.
Its power comes from technical concentration. The handwritten insertion around Hand / holds / THE SPIN, AND THE SPOUTING keeps the page visibly in revision, while the typed sequence moves from work procedure into identification: the worker is underneath, then beneath the top, then the top. The poem turns circus rigging into a logic of doubleness, with security and danger present at the same time.
Just Before The Top, final pass: the full technical litany, he was the top, two of everything, security and danger at the same time.