Back Then

By Jack Joseph Smith

I went to Mexico on foot I went to the sea of Japan on a Schooner too I went to Venezuela on a yachat I went across the Tropic of Capricora on a boat Appropriately the good Fiji Saved my life When through some sort of design All the places had a battle going on; but it was not, Vietnam

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AI Interpretation

GPT

A catalog of youthful travels by foot, schooner, yacht, and boat across Mexico, Japan, Venezuela, and Fiji, where every destination happened to have a battle going on — yet none of them was Vietnam.


Claude

A compact travelogue that lists arrivals by every means and across every latitude - 'to Mexico on foot,' 'to the sea of Japan / on a Schooner too' 'to Venezuela / on a yachat,' 'across the Tropic / of Capricora on a boat' - until 'the good Fiji / Saved my life.' The turn is in the last lines: 'through some sort / of design / All the places had / a battle going on; / but it was not, / Vietnam' The poem reframes its catalogue of adventure as a series of near-wars survived, with the one absent war naming itself last and loudest.