All For Count Down Kill

By Jack Joseph Smith

The Vietnam War is done none to soon As the Pentagon limousine arrives at the showroom of GO***GO cigar girls and cocktails Where the business man opens his belly of revenge on the leather draw of a wallet By building on the craze of resolute brains for hire THE ABSOLUTE BIRD Past he has gone where Mammon lies in the mammouth of possibilities in the long fear arm of the absurd On to wings of atomic accent Drafting up-date the pre-historic to an off-slant Giving sharp modern spread across the chest of a beast while selling now concerns the Middle East White tunnel of super fuel behind ......the damned demon demand Cold sun glared flight on inner neverend Well disciplined new Kipling Cadet training ground creations - from Colorado to the Sahara - finally get to murder at the center Quite even upon international intrigue Over the strategic spot of a target that could include their own But mission must finger button push Man to what is fragment wiped-out off hot neuron rush...... While the pilot craves the computer of individualized victory: Which inacts technological mass mind superiority Into a crack clocked timed being - being - Cock Pit sure on the aloof tight lipped shout down from the above About exoneration with scientific exorcism; the explosions of guilts below Which floats dolphin steel through the sucking weaves of fast popping liquid like air pockets rolling out for the missle like a long wave in a stream As the metalic glow going gray is watched away from the plane On the glaze of a Captain's eyes Outside sockets off silver speed
Intentional celestial destruction Fore-stands chance behind the uniformity of vivid bombs unleashing the chemical blaze of good-by charred humanity Against the sky smeared canvas of bloody beauty that makes Raphael at last abstract The pre-analytical dawn shimmering the darkness of a kind of color film concept free from plastics IS FIRST past visionary sights warriors go blind from I can not remember lava And war I have only known one to one But battle lose the duelity I will not Of how intensely insane is slaughter Manufactured to drop on the objectivity of a dot

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GPT

A sprawling anti-war poem that traces the Vietnam conflict from Pentagon showrooms to cockpit to ocean, layering military-industrial spectacle, atomic weaponry, and the aesthetics of aerial bombardment into a vision of destruction so total it makes Renaissance painting abstract by comparison.


Claude

Under 'ALL / FOR / COUNT DOWN KILL', the poem opens 'The Vietnam War is done none to soon', follows a 'Pentagon limousine' to the 'GO***GO cigar girls and cocktails', notes that 'selling now concerns the Middle East', and tracks a bombing run in which 'the pilot craves the computer / of individualized victory:' before 'Intentional celestial destruction' paints 'the sky smeared canvas / of bloody beauty'. It ends 'And war I have only known one to one / But battle lose the duelity I will not' and 'Manufactured to drop on the objectivity of a dot'.

War appears as a sales cycle and as an abstract painting, and the pilot is reduced to 'a crack clocked timed being'. The speaker sets one-to-one experience of war against that distance and refuses to give up the 'duelity' that keeps an enemy from becoming 'a dot'. 'mammouth', 'inacts', 'missle', 'metalic' and 'duelity' are typed forms.