All For Count Down Kill
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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A sprawling anti-war poem that traces the Vietnam conflict from Pentagon showrooms to cockpit to ocean, layering military-industrial spectacle, atomic weaponry, and the aesthetics of aerial bombardment into a vision of destruction so total it makes Renaissance painting abstract by comparison.
Under 'ALL / FOR / COUNT DOWN KILL', the poem opens 'The Vietnam War is done none to soon', follows a 'Pentagon limousine' to the 'GO***GO cigar girls and cocktails', notes that 'selling now concerns the Middle East', and tracks a bombing run in which 'the pilot craves the computer / of individualized victory:' before 'Intentional celestial destruction' paints 'the sky smeared canvas / of bloody beauty'. It ends 'And war I have only known one to one / But battle lose the duelity I will not' and 'Manufactured to drop on the objectivity of a dot'.
War appears as a sales cycle and as an abstract painting, and the pilot is reduced to 'a crack clocked timed being'. The speaker sets one-to-one experience of war against that distance and refuses to give up the 'duelity' that keeps an enemy from becoming 'a dot'. 'mammouth', 'inacts', 'missle', 'metalic' and 'duelity' are typed forms.