Alfie in the Drowning Fred
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The speaker remembers Fred on Los Angeles beaches and at the Venice Oar House Tavern, then recalls Fred leaving for Washington State. The Great White Fox later reports Fred's Seattle marriage, Boeing layoff, and drowning while fishing in high rubber boots.
The speaker says they liked Fred and regrets losing his Alfie. The account joins the speaker's remembered companionship with another man's later report, ending on unemployment compensation.
The poem portrays Fred, 'lean and handsome', who worked at 'Douglas Aircraft', crossed 'the Los Angeles beaches in the sixties' and drank with the speaker 'In the Venice Oar House Tavern', then reports through 'The Great White Fox' that Fred married 'up in Seattle', was 'Laid off by Boeing', and 'got sucked under forever / by his high rubber boots, / while fishing a stream...'.
Affection and comedy turn into elegy, with the loss told through hearsay and a plain physical detail. The people named are the poem's figures; 'loose' and 'streightforward' are typed spellings.